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Reading: Informational, Grade 7: Objective 2.A.4.d: Discussion 1
Student Response, 2st Classroom

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Each teacher was asked to bring three papers to the discussion — one in the top of the class performance, one in the middle, and one in the bottom of the class performance. Papers were chosen before the team defined proficiency. After defining proficiency, teachers often changed their minds about how they ordered their papers. The online discussion will make that clearer.

Question: Write a summary of “A Lifeline for Lions.(Acrobat)

Top Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • Demonstrates an understanding of the main idea by including:
    “... lions were dying from a disease ...started vaccinating the original host where the problem started... mentions the group that helped”
  • Paraphrases

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Needs to include the name of the disease
    “It would have been important to mention what the disease was...”

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Look at more complex text
 

Middle Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • States that the problem with the lions is Distemper

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Needs to include details about the solution - the cure for Distemper

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Provide think-aloud questions
  • Emphasize tying in the problem and solution

Where would you go next instructionally with the class?

  • Model what you’re looking for and how to go about the process of locating information
  • Teach the students to find the main idea in texts wherethe main idea is right there and in those where you have to infer
  • Help students identify main idea through questions:
    What do you think this article is about?
    What is the author trying to tell you about this topic?
  • Teach students what’s important by putting information together from text features such as title, subheadings, pictures, captions, and maps
  • Ask the students to verbally summarize
    Is it an issue of getting it on paper or comprehending the text?
 

Bottom Classroom Response

What did the student understand?

  • Briefly touches on the topic and problem

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Needs to include the solution

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Find out if the student comprehended the article by asking questions
  • Model a proficient writing response, highlighting the areas that she lacked
  • Have student focus on tying the whole article together
 
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