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Reading: Informational, Grade 7: Objective 2.A.4.g: Discussion 1
Student Response, 1st Classroom

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Each teacher was asked to bring three papers to the discussion — one in the top of the class performance, one in the middle, and one in the bottom of the class performance. Papers were chosen before the team defined proficiency. After defining proficiency, teachers often changed their minds about how they ordered their papers. The online discussion will make that clearer.

Question: What additional relevant information could be added to the article, "Swimming with Sharks", that would be helpful to the reader to better understand the development of shark repellant? Explain using support from the text. (Acrobat)

Top Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • Understands the content of what they were reading
  • Shows insight by wanting to know how the poison entered the shark to have that effect
  • Synthesizes the information from the article
  • Recognizes places where the article left her with questions

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Needs to develop one of the questions to show why this is important to understanding the development of shark repellent.

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Work on conciseness
  • Have her key in to maybe two or three questions
  • “You say that... Now why would you want to know that information based on what you read?”
 

Middle Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • Understands the article and provides information to help the reader understand the development of shark repellent

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Needs to develop ideas more

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Ask the student questions to better understand his thinking about whe he chose his questions: “Why would that be relevant? Why put that in there?”
 

Middle Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • Focuses on one thing but develops it
  • He talks about the substance and wants to know what is in it. He asks, “How do we know it’s going to be safe for humans?“

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Needs to use fewer quotes
  • Synthesized the information with fewer words

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Explain the phrase: “Use support from the text”
  • Have him identify the three areas that he pointed out and then ask, “Out of those three areas, which one do you think would be the most relevant?”
  • Give him more challenging, complex material

Where would you go next instructionally with the class?

  • Put some of the responses on the overhead and take parts from each of the papers to make one perfect paper
 

Bottom Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • Understands that we wanted additional information

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Missing the major points of the article
  • Needs to understand what he is being asked to do

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Find out if he understood the question
  • Ask him to further analyze the question; make sure he looked at all parts of the question
  • Check to see if this is a vocabulary problem.
  • Does he know the meaning of ‘repellent’ or ‘relevant’?
  • Have him explain what the question is asking
  • “What am I asking you to do here?“
  • Use different wording to make sure he understands
  • Read the article aloud with him one-on-one
  • Chunk it in small pieces
  • Ask questions as he goes through the article to guide the thinking process
  • Look for a logical sequence of ideas and have him write them down as we go rather than waiting until the end
 
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