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Reading: Informational, Grade 7: Objective 2.A.4.g: Discussion 1
Student Response, 2st Classroom

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Each teacher was asked to bring three papers to the discussion — one in the top of the class performance, one in the middle, and one in the bottom of the class performance. Papers were chosen before the team defined proficiency. After defining proficiency, teachers often changed their minds about how they ordered their papers. The online discussion will make that clearer.

Question: What additional relevant information could be added to the article, "Swimming with Sharks", that would be helpful to the reader to better understand the development of shark repellant? Explain using support from the text. (Acrobat)

Top Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • Asks good questions
  • “Why does it stun or kill fish?”
  • “Is it poisonous to humans?”
  • Uses supportive information from the text
  • Shows insight by asking, “Why do we have to make a chemical compound like the poison? Couldn’t they just use the fish?”

What does the student still need to learn?

  • (No needs were identified)

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Talk to her about paraphrasing
 

Middle Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • Understands how to pull information from the text
  • How to make a personal connection to the text

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Needs to use more text support for her questions in answering “Why?”

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Work on paraphrasing
  • Work on focusing on one idea
  • In a small group, ask literal questions about the text like, “what happened after that?”
  • Determine if she understood the article and then move to what the question was asking

Where would you go next instructionally with the class?

  • Use the word “important” instead of “relevant.” What is the important information?
  • Create a T-chart to allow them to put down their interesting and important ideas
  • Hone in on exactly what we are doing and what the question is asking
  • “Then go back to the text and pick out the information that would be absolutely necessary to the development of shark repellent.”
  • Check to see if they have understood the text
  • Build vocabulary and their background knowledge about Eugene Clark and her research
  • Have students place a sticky-note whenever they have questions they are left with after reading a paragraph
  • Review the sticky-note questions with the class. Then they can separate the sticky-notes that answer the question from those that are interesting facts.
  • Work in a small group to break the article into smaller portions to be sure they comprehend the text
 

Bottom Classroom Response

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What did the student understand?

  • Can give his opinion
  • Knew there was something lacking in the story that he is supposed to address
  • Identified a person’s name from the first page

What does the student still need to learn?

  • Need to know if he read the article

Where would you go next instructionally with this student?

  • Hold him accountable for completing the article; work in a small group to ask one-to-one questions for getting him involved
  • Ask him, “Where did it begin not to make sense to you?”
  • Work with him individually; move him through the story; ask the right type of questions to make it more interesting

Where would you go next instructionally with the class?

  • Make transparencies of student papers that represent proficient and not proficient responses
  • Ask, “What did this paper have that this one didn’t have?”
  • Use this question again with a different text
 
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